Thursday, June 27, 2013

Kristen--Post 2

Hello everyone,

I hope you are well and finding time in your busy schedules to enjoy the summer, too.

I have been very busy lately getting more and more into the Art From The Heart program and integrating it into outside projects as well. The outside projects are really the more direct "writing-related" aspects of what I'm doing; however, every time I'm at the hospital I'm using my writing skills through communication, stories, or distractions.

Since our last posting, I've started doing some reading and writing with some of the kids. Last week, I made my first fill-in-the-blank story--it was intended for a very young age spectrum, say 3 to 7, and fit on the front side of a construction paper sheet. What I did here was move a story through a beginning, middle, and end but didn't actually regulate much of the content. About 70 percent of the story was blank, with instructions under each blank as to what kind of word/thing they should put there. (Obviously, for younger children this will be done with the help of someone else.) I'll show you an example of one sometime soon so maybe it will be a clearer picture.

Here's what's interesting about these blank stories, though: it seems like it would be really easy and almost lazy to write a story with so many empty spaces, but it's actually very difficult. I have to make sure that the story will make (somewhat) sense regardless of what anyone chooses to put in the blank based on the instruction for that particular blank and also have to make sure that following blanks will allow a story to be cohesive enough to either send a message, be funny, be impactful...anything. I have other story ideas too, but this is the one I've practiced already and have found helpful. The biggest motivator for these stories with blanks is one with a bigger meaning that I've learned in the hospital in my time there.

In the hospital, kids don't really get to make many choices. There is not a wide array of options for them to either approve or disapprove of what's going on in their lives and with their own bodies that they may or may not understand all too well depending on their age and development. So, volunteers and people like me working with them find that when you ask them a question pertaining to what they want to do...they wait for more direction or slink back, not being confident in their ability to control much. Thus, these blank stories and several other activities I do with the kids myself, allow kids to recognize their creative ability and furthermore their creative ability in a hospital setting where either they or someone they know is being hospitalized and controlled.

Here's a better example maybe: I was painting with a little girl last week and asked her what she wanted to paint and like almost all of them, she said she didn't know. So instead of offering a list of examples of what she could paint, I just got her talking about things she was interested in. Butterflies came up so I suggested she paint one if she wanted. She said yes and got the paint ready...but then hesitated again and asked me if I could draw the caterpillar part and she could draw the wings. Now, it would be incredibly easy for me to paint a "caterpillar part," but I instead put my hand over hers and had her essentially do it on her own. This way, she realized she could actually paint that portion of it and had control the whole time over the picture.

I'm realizing now that I've probably written enough and should leave you all to go on and read other posts. To wrap it up, my goals for next time are to have done more blank stories and started a new reading or writing project, to continue the consistency of being at the hospital two or three mornings a week, to remain involved in the outside writing project (I still can't tell you about it but I will be getting official permission and consent this week so I will be able to next time) and to of course, remember that at the core of all of these things I am doing with this internship is the well-being of patients and their families and how I am honored to be a part of their lives each and every time.

Everyone have a safe and fun holiday week!
-KO

4 comments:

  1. It sounds to me as if you're a natural at drawing young people out, Kristen. Taking her hand in yours and letting her draw the caterpillar was intuitive ... the perfect reply to her request.

    I like what you said about the challenge of creating these blank stories, and how you have to anticipate all manner of scenarios so any one will make sense. Talk about practice for building narrative skills in your own fiction. And, if I may - as you'll no doubt recall from Technical Writing - doing that is targeted writing: anticipating your targets' responses and writing accordingly.

    It'll be nice to see what you're producing.

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  2. I really liked your perspective on the service you are giving to these kids. Like you said, they aren't the decision makers most of the time, and allowing them to "fill in the blanks" of story-telling relieves that. Obviously the first thing that popped in my head was doing madlibs with my sister on airplane rides when we were younger. Most blanks were filled with "fart" "poop" and "dumb". First-class comedians.
    Hopefully the inventiveness and maturity level of your children will peak above my own.

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  3. The blank story idea is so great. I bet you could make serious money writing them. Just a thought.

    Your work with children is really inspiring. It captures the innocence of children who are surrounded by a much more serious environment that their minds can't always comprehend. It's hard work to keep a child entertained but sometimes it's the simpler ideas that prove to be the best. That's why the blank story idea works so well.

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  4. I'm really excited to hear what exactly your writing project entails, because you're already doing some great things with the kids. It's cool to see the ways a writer can impact people, especially these children whose lives are sometimes drastically different than those of other kids. I don't think a lot of students at Champlain would think of using their writing skills in this way, so kudos to you. Plus I get the impression you're enjoying things, too, which is really great.

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